Excellent selection of fonts to appeal to target audience. Your cover image and use of language also directly addresses your audience. You have developed a clear house-style through fonts. Good use of mise en scene to create meaning.

Targets:
1. Research existing magazines and have a look at the size of text and positioning of cover-lines. Your text is too large in places. You were right to keep your cover lines away from your central image but the placement and size could be improved.
2. Make sure text is visible - put a colour-block behind it if you have to place it upon a multi-coloured background.
3. Consider the use of lower and upper case lettering for impact and meaning.
4. Ensure central image is larger - the cover star is usually an aspirational figure to the audience - make sure they are as visible as possible to attract a larger audience!